Didn't finish the inks but orphan is mostly finished now. Feels a lot more cohesive than before.
As is usual though it will make much more sense once the colors start getting layer in.
I still haven't quite worked out how standard will go from this moment to the one where she has Orphan in a head lock.
Perhaps a swift kick to a sensitive spot or she has to resort to stabbing her.
I'm playing witht he idea that when Orphan reverts that she has bruises or scars in all the places she was injured.
Saying something like... "I hurt everywhere." :c
I imagine days later wondering how she got these weird scars she didn't remember getting.
Tell me what you think so far, does anything stick out as particularly weird or bad with the anatomy? If so please tell me so I can get it fixed. ^ o^ Even just telling me that something feels weird will help me to figure out what i might be missing from working with it too closely.