The Fief Lord Revealed, impressed with what a good girl his Shewolf has been.
I'm leaning towards the Lord falling into the role of Gold Wolf, one of the Four lords, among the Fang. His power will be added to the pack where he himself will gain his lycanthropy via his new bride.
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This page still wasn't sitting well with me. Beefed up the look of ferocity of her close up, Tilted the panel border to make her feel less claustrophobic. and re positioned the victim so that the action reads a bit better.
Did another set of Sketch Draw Overs to give peeps a better idea of what you might get after submitting your own sketches.
Don't forget that Gold Tier Patrons get 2 Draw Over Requests per month staring this month! Submit your requests today via the Wolf Pack Queue in the Crimson Dames Discord! Not an artist? Thats okay you can offer it to someone who you think would appreciate. ^ _^ Take 2 for Emperor Scion, Got feedback already, wasn't quite what they were looking for yet so will try a new take tomorrow.
Wasn't digging the second panel, anatomy was too off and kind of doubling up on the anticipation. I think this works better, tho i think the eyes aren't scary enough just yet. Not sure if the body of the second thief makes sense yet too. Tell me what you think. :0
I decided to experiment with doing draw overs of sketches provided to me by Peffy, a patron who has gone above and beyond with his support.
I managed to knock out 3 in about an hours time so I think it goes quickly enough that I'll be able to start offering this to all gold tier Patrons. I think I'll experiment with 2 per month. This will be a perk that will greatly benefit aspiring artists as well as myself in that it will help to re enforce key lessons I might be going slack on. I'll go ahead and open it up starting today. Gold Tier Patrons will be allowed to submit 2 sketches to the WolfPack Queue and In the Crimson Dames Discord Server. If your a Gold Tier Patron and don't draw, you can submit works from a friend who you think would be able to benefit from the process and would appreciate it. Second head meats with physics, as a 4th character is introduced!
A familiar scent snaps her out of her blood lust. Hrmm I hadn't intended on this guy being anyone of major importance to the wider story line of Crimson Dames that I have planned. Though now I'm thinking. I do have a few roles that haven't been fleshed out or designed yet. And if our gal here was a gift from the fang for services rendered, then perhaps it might be ideal if our Fief Lord here is developed into one of the 4 generals of the Fang. White and Black are fulfilled already. So I'm leaning toward blue or brown wolf. Though those names don't really evoke any sort of danger. What if I go with Timber for brown. and ... hrmmm. With Blue Wolf I guess I was leaning more towards a different shade of black. Really isnt working tho. maybe gold? hrmm yeah looking up pics now I think gold will work better. Timber will be a more typical shade of brown with gold wolf being more of a light toasted brown. White, Black, Timber, and Gold. Or should White be silver or gray? X0 Tell me what you think, and what you think of the progress thus far. do any of the panels feel particularly off to you? I know i keep sliding off model for the shewolf, which pages do u think I really need to take a second look at? Does anyone read these posts?? ._ . Shifted some elements around to make more space and simplified the first panel. Also changed up that one panel that just looked... wrong. XD
I'll work in a grisly sound effect into the background for the severed head scene. But I'm not the best at text so I'll likely be playing with fonts to come up with something that looks a bit better. I do like how the second thief turned out who is literally trying to escape the comic at this point XD |
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